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'Sharp Teeth': A Ferociously Good Read

By Vivian Dent, AlterNet. Posted May 29, 2008.


Author Toby Barlow's epic poem about werewolves in Los Angeles is a page-turner with insights and imagery that will resonate long after you read it.
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Toby Barlow's first novel, Sharp Teeth, starts out scary. Not because it's about werewolves -- in gangs, in Los Angeles -- though I guess that's part of it. No, the main thing is the free verse trailing down the pages. At first glance, it looks Odyssey of the Ancient Waste Land scary, a whole lot of hard work.

But then I started to read. And I thought, "Hey, this isn't hard at all! It's interesting. Kind of fun." And I did just what Nick Hornby did: "I looked at the first page, got to the bottom of it, turned it over, read the second page, and ..." kept reading. Faster and faster. Straight through to the end. And then I started flipping back through the best parts.

See, this book is really good. It's got Raymond Chandler atmosphere and James Ellroy tension, surfer dudes and drug smugglers and a nervous, not-yet-old lady from Pasadena. It's got blood and violence and betrayal and corruption, but it's also got all the loyalty that a pack of werewolves -- who, it turns out, sometimes have a lot in common with dogs -- can bring. It's got Anthony, a gentle guy from East L.A. who takes a job as a dogcatcher just as the werewolves are getting down to business. And because it's got Anthony, along with a lonely she-wolf, it's got one of the most entrancing love stories I've encountered in a long time.

And yeah, it's got poetry. Most of the time the taut language pulls you along, deeper and deeper into the narrative, making you wonder why we ever bothered with prose in the first place. But every now and then a passage stops you cold. Here's Barlow on incest:

The world, as a result, turned backward

where blossoms buried themselves while

roots reached like starving fingers

to the grey and fruitless sky.

Ouch.

If you like a meaningful story, told dazzlingly well, read this book. Don't waste time with "I don't like fantasy" or "I don't like poetry" or "Isn't that a little weird?" Take my word for it. Or David Mamet's. Or Scott Smith's. Or again, Nick Hornby's, who wrote that Sharp Teeth is "as ambitious as any literary novel, because underneath all that fur, it's about identity, community, love, death, and all the things we want our books to be about." It's that rare page-turner whose insights and imagery will resonate long after the book's back on the shelf, even when you can look again at the big dog snoozing at your feet and see just a furry companion who likes his ears scratched, just so.

Toby Barlow and reporter Rick Kleffel recently discussed the writing of Sharp Teeth for NPR's Weekend Edition. A transcript of the story follows.

Liane Hansen: When Toby Barlow set out to write his first novel, Sharp Teeth, he knew he wanted to tell a story about love and werewolves in modern Los Angeles. But why did he choose to write it in free verse?

Toby Barlow: It's a tricky one to explain. You do have to get rid of, you know, a lot of initial resistance from people who just kind of roll their -- I mean, I had a hard time getting friends to read this.

Hansen: As Rick Kleffel from member station KUSP explains, Sharp Teeth pays homage to both Homer and monster movies. It's an epic love story, as well as a bloody tale of struggles for power.

Rick Kleffel: On the cover, the black silhouette of a dog with silver fangs snarls against a blood-red background. Inside, the stark simplicity continues as the story is told in free verse. Toby Barlow begins with a heroic portrait of a thin, brown-skinned man wearing a T-shirt.

Barlow: The first lines I wrote of the book are the first lines in the book which are, you know, let's sing about that man there.

Kleffel: Specifically, let's sing about the man there at the breakfast table, an unemployed resident of East L.A. who will soon find a job in the classifieds as a dogcatcher.

Barlow: And to me, it was a bit of a tongue-in-cheek joke in reference to Homer. I'm a huge fan of The Iliad. I'm an enormous fan of The Odyssey. So it seemed to me a worthy ambition to say let's sing about something else. Let's sing about the dogcatcher. So it's a song of a common man in a very uncommon situation.


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Dr. Vivian Dent is a psychologist in private practice in San Francisco.

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This plot has been done to death . . .
Posted by: Moonray on May 29, 2008 4:35 AM   
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Back in the '80s there was a flurry of werewolf movies and books. In the '90s too, come to think of it. I guess it's an old tried-and-true plot that is trotted out every decade or so. Most publishers wouldn't know a really good book if it bit them on the ass. This article is quite a commercial, though. Maybe teens who've never read anything and missed the American Werewolf in Paris/London movies might buy the book.

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Green Island
Posted by: siamdave on May 29, 2008 4:46 AM   
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- the only werewolves on Green Island are wearing US SEAL uniforms, but we manage to get rid of em ok, as we beat off the latest American regime change operation - a wannabe horror story. Green Island - the adults have regained control.

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The Howling is the seminal and best of werewolf stories as psychological study.
Posted by: nightgaunt on May 29, 2008 2:34 PM   
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Came out the same year as "AMERICAN WEREWOLF IN LONDON" which got more press. But it was John Sayles script that studied the human in such depth with the werewolf part being the metaphor for the psychopathic tendencies in the human gene pool. It wasn't simply a 'monster movie' or 'fright fest.'It had depth. When humans hunt and kill other humans they are sometimes referred to as "wolves."
The psychopath is a wolf in human clothing. They think differently from us,consider us to be used. They seek out those like themselves and others who show affinity to change to be more like themselves.
By the way Whitley Strieber's "WOLFIN"(1978) was an excellent novel. Hated the movie. Hope a new version will be made someday. It is about an offshoot of wolves that evolved parallel to humans to hunt only humans. High concept horror. Since we don't have any natural enemies the literature fills the need for one. Fictional of course. See all monster movies and novels and legends and stories of demons,witches and vampires that hunt and eat humans.
We,however,are our own enemy and could very well destroy ourselves before we reach maturity.

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Free verse ain't free
Posted by: supercrisp on May 29, 2008 3:01 PM   
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The verse here is pretty dull. Granted, the guy has to maintain it over thousands of lines, so he can't set himself up to do too many fancy things, but, lord, this stuff is just flat and dull.

I just tried to dig up some of Walcott's Omeros for a counter-comparison, but all I'm finding are "study-guides" (aka crib sheets for lazy students). The Walcott, any of the long H.D., like Helen in Egypt, or even Heaney's recent translation of Beowulf can give you some idea of what can be done with narrative verse.

With a little effort verse narratives are a great idea, but this stuff barely makes good prose. But it's not like the folks at NPR have any taste anyway. They should get back to drooling over Vampire Weekend.

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werewolves... vampires... werewolve versus vampires... ad nausea
Posted by: Bearzerker on May 29, 2008 10:58 PM   
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... when will this tripe stop polluting the airwaves...

I mean it may have been scary back in the 1930's but I much prefer the 2007 Flash Gordon remake over any modern day made vampire/werewolf fetish flick...
It's way over done... crispy critter overdone!

now whereas the zombie flicks like dawn of the dead... they got old fast too, but at least producers had the sense to trivialize and make quality satire and comedy outta those! [remember diner of the living dead?]

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Sharp teeth
Posted by: Angie on May 30, 2008 2:50 AM   
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When I saw this article, I realized that this site is the closest I've come to joining a book club (the discussion of the regular articles).

I haven't read much poetry, but the four lines I read in this article have piqued my curiosity. I like the use of analogy and symbolism, which isn't too obscure for my feeble mind, that can evoke emotion and is meaningful.

In response to a previous post, it is ironic that no species developed as an effective natural enemy to humans, besides humans.

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I liked this
Posted by: Timberbee on Jun 1, 2008 9:03 PM   
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"His father was not a man but a sleepy bull
with sledgehammer hands and a soft heart."

Yes, this rolls off the tongue. It reminds me of "365 and a Wakeup". Poetry as life. It can be bad poetry, or hard poetry, but it is there, real as breath. Hot, ragged breath, breathing in sand and grime and heavy, heavy heat.

I read the excerpt linked at the bottom of this story. It was good. I want to read more.

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Reminded
Posted by: Timberbee on Jun 1, 2008 9:19 PM   
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Its funny. I forgot that reading this excerpt was... like being free. Free to write what you experience, how you experience it. Not needing to fit within the confines of how another says you must conform, for proprieties sake.

I was reminded of this as I returned to read thunder6's poetry. His writings on the war. And it is poetry, and, it conveys so much, so quickly. It is like being there, that is... hearing him speak, and that is what I liked of Sharp Teeth. Being there.

Prose is nice, but, it is not how I think, it is not how I see others interact, not when they begin speaking to me as though they had known me forever, or, carry on as though I never existed at all.

Werewolves overdone? Never. But, from the brief read... I don't think this is about that. I think it could be Werewolves, or aliens, or... door salesmen. those door to door, door salesmen. Showing you their books of doors, their crooked, smiles, their stained, relaxed fit Levi snap front shirts. The johnny Appleseeds of doors, and all things that open and close, and, look through leaded glass upon Worlds of bright green grass beneath spreading Apple trees. Harkening back to the good old days of tad poles and ice cold glasses, beaded with ice cold drops of water, ready to be pressed against a throat, hot and hoarse, and dust caked.

yeah, I liked this excerpt. More please

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